目录
1. 中招英语作文写事篇
2. 中招英语作文写人篇
3. 中招英语作文写地篇
4. 中招满分作文的解析
1. 中招写事篇英语作文
我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以 “I did it!” 为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述一件你完成的棘手的事情。
1.要点：1) 你做了什么事情；
2) 你是如何做那件事情的；
3) 你做完那件事情后的感受。
2.要求：1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2) 词数80左右。
范文1
易时代备考中考范文
An Event That I will Never Forget
Of all the events that I have experienced, there is one that I'll never forget.
（经典开头句，点题，成功开启下文）在我经历的所有事中，有一件让我终身难忘。
It was one day in summer. I was told to take part in a music competition. You can imagine
（时间） （事件）
how surprised and anxious I was. To be honest, I was afraid to take part in it. When I was about to give up, my
（当时的心情，以便于和后文做对比）
music teacher encouraged me and helped me a lot. With his encouragement and through my hard work, I
（事情发生转机的原因）
unexpectedly won the first prize.（最终的结果）
This experience teaches me an important lesson: When a chance comes, we should face it bravely.
（经验，教训）
范文2
2017年中招参考范文
I did it!
How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech! It was my first speech and I didn’t know what to do.
（心情） （事件）
My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched
（事情发生转机的原因）
videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills. Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.
I did it!!! Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.
（感受）
对比两篇范文，我们可以看出明显的区别：
中考范文无经典开头和结尾，说明大部分学生会写成这种，如果你有经典开头和结尾，怎能不增分?
聪明的你，总结出写事篇作文要注意哪些事项？
写事篇作文，有经典开头和抒情结尾，可为作文增分不少；
‚ 思路清晰，介绍时间发生的经过，以及关键性人物；
ƒ 写写作过程中，一定要注意自己情感的表达，这是作文的灵魂。
2.中招写人篇范文
第一：我们来看一篇河南中考英语作文
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special ______”为题用英
语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
第二：读完题材后，你的思路是什么呢？怎么样写才能出彩呢？
我们来看下面的一篇范文，来总结写人篇的写作技巧
My Special English Teacher
①Looking back at these past three years, many teachers have taught me, but the one that/who impressed me most is my English teacher.
②He is a tall man who wears glasses and has short hair. He is not only patient but also friendly to us. ③What’s more, his classes are so interesting that we are all active in class. We are becoming more and more interested in learning English. ④When I have trouble learning English, he is the first to find and help me come over the difficulties.
⑤Thank you, my English teacher. You have made a big difference to my life. I’ll never forget you.
①回顾过往的三年，很多老师教过我，但是令我印象最深刻的是我的英语老师。
②他个子高，戴着眼镜，留着短发。他不仅对我们很耐心，而且很友好。③更重要的是，他的课很有意思，我们在课堂上表现的都很活跃。我们对学英语越来越感兴趣了。④当我学习英语有困难的时候，他是第一个发现并帮助我解决困难的人。
⑤谢谢你，我的英语老师。你对我的生活已经产生了很大的影响。我永远不会忘记你。
总结
第一段： ①首段出彩，起承转合，简单两句，说出英语老师对于你的特殊意义；
②从外貌、性格上描写；
第二段： ③从老师的课堂上，侧面写出对老师的喜爱；
④从学习上，老师对我的帮助
第三段：⑤总结全文，呼应标题，经典收尾句。
写作中的亮点句：
1. looking back at..... 回首.......
2. not only......but also....... 不仅......而且......
3. what’s more 更重要的是
4. have trouble (in) doing sth 做某事有困难
5. the first to do sth 第一个做......的
6. come over the difficulties 克服困难
7. make a big difference to.....对......产生了很大的影响
3.中招写地方篇范文
暑假即将来临，经历了一学期的辛苦学习，想要到哪里去放松身心，欢度暑假呢？你有没有特别想去但一直没有去的地方，或者你去过一些比较有特色地方，让你流连忘返呢？请以此为主题，写一篇短文。
要点提示：1. 想去的地方
2. 原因，特色
3. 字数不少于80字。
范文：
A Good Place to Take a Summer Vacation
①Among the places I have ever been to, I think Hainan island is the best place to take a summer vacation.
②Hainan lies in the south of China. Though it's a little hot there in summer, you can enjoy all kinds of water sports, such as swimming and surfing. ③Besides, the fresh air there makes people feel relaxed. ④What's more, there are many kinds of fruits all year round. It is a wonderful place for fruit lovers.
⑤No matter how many times I have been there, I will never be tired of visiting it.
① 在我所去过的地方中，我觉得海南岛是度假的最佳胜地。
② 海南岛地处中国南部。虽然夏季气候炎热，但是你可以尽享各种各样的水上运动，比如游泳，冲浪。③除此之外，海南的新鲜空气让人放松身心。④ 除此之外，那一年到头都有水果。是水果爱好者的一个胜地。
⑤不论我去过多少次，我从不会厌烦。
总结
第一段： ①首段出彩，言简意赅， 说出海南岛是自己最想去的地方；
②从地理位置上，地处沿海，水上活动丰富；
第二段： ③从生活环境上，空气新鲜，让人放松；
④从吃的水果上，水果种类繁多；
第三段：⑤总结全文，再次表达自己对海南岛的喜爱；
写作中的亮点句：
1. among the places I have even been to 在我曾经去过的地方中
2. the best place to do sth 做....的最佳地方
3. such as doing sth 例如....
4. besides 除此之外
5. what’s more 更重要的是
6. no matter 无论
7. be tired of doing sth 厌烦做某事
4. 中招满分作文的解析
对于“碰到作业困难时是否向老师请教”，同学们持有不同的观点，请你根据下表的提示，用英语写一篇短文，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并谈谈你的观点及理由，发表在校园网的论坛上。
观点 | 理由 |
向老师请教 | 老师讲解得清楚，易于理解增加与老师交流的机会 |
不向老师请教 | 性格内向，羞于开口，怕被同学嘲笑 |
你的观点及理由：...........(理由至少两条，不能重复已给的理由) | |
注意
1. 短文必须包括表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总次数，你只需接着写；
3. 词数80左右
一起来解析高分范文吧！
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems.
Some students think asking teachers for help is necessary. Teachers know the textbooks well and can explain
观点1的开头句 doing 作主语的观点句
the students’ problems clearly. Besides, it’s a good chance to communicate with teachers.
并列连词 it’s a good chance to do 亮点句
While other students don’t think so. These students are usually shy and afraid to ask the teachers. What’s more,
观点2的开头句 并列连词
they are afraid of being laughed by their classmates.
In my opinion, we’d better ask the teachers for help when necessary. After all, the teachers have lots of
你的观点开头句 连词
experience solving our problems. However, for some easy problems, we’d better think by ourselves to make sure
你的理由1 转折连词
it’s difficult enough to trouble the teachers.
你的理由2
